Audience Summary

From the audience feedback I have learnt that they liked the colours on my front cover and think they go well together, they also like the picture that is used as the background of the cover. I wasn't sure if the logo for the title was too bright but they didn't mention it and liked it. They said you can tell who the magazine is aimed at but the front cover and colours used. I have taken their advice by adding more writing and changing the font styles.

From the audience feedback I have learnt that they liked how I used a lot of pictures on my contents page to show what is included in my music magazine. They also liked that I included an editor’s message in my magazine with a chatty, informal language. They weren’t sure about the plain background, but liked the colours used and fonts. I added more pictures because it looked too bland.

From the audience feedback I have learnt that they like my blue background which I used for my DPS. They also like how I cut the background out the picture I used for the left hand side of my DPS. Plus you can tell it’s a music magazine because there is a guitar used as a prop in my photograph. They weren’t sure if the title stands out from the rest of the page, but I like the colour that I used so I didn’t change it.

Audience feedback

I have finished my final drafts for all my pages; I have taken in the audience feedback and made improvements to all my pages. Please answer these questions and tell me what you think...

What do you like about my pages?

What do you dislike about my pages?

Do you think the colours go well together?

Do you think there is still room for improvement?

What do you think about the improvements I have made?

What are your initial thoughts about my front cover?

What makes my pages look pofessional?

Weekly review

This week I have took more photos for my content page to make it look more filler. I have also made some slight changes to my pages and made a start on my evaluation.

Content page - Final draft

This is my final content page draft i have added two more pictures to fill in the space more, I have also added a picture of me for the editor's message. I have also decided to go for a white background because there are a lot of different colours used. If you think there are any changes needed please comment.

More photos

 

These are some more photos i have took for my content page.

Contents page draft

This is my contents page draft i think i need to i'll up the space more by adding more pictures but i'm not sure what else to add. I have added a link and the date and issue. I'm not sure if I like the colour of the background or just leave it plain white. I have added the title of the magazine in the contents page as well. I think i need to add slightly more contents.

Final Front Cover design

This is my final front cover design, I have changed the colour of the picture slightly to make Eve look less pale and brings out the colours of the font better. I have also used some space on the left hand side by adding a quote from the person in the front cover. I have also added a pink star shape to draw attention to the compitition. i've tried not to use too many different colours and stayed in a range of 4-5 colours. Leave a comment if you think that there are anymore inprovments you think need making.